Matt Bellamy

Hello! Welcome to YWS. I think your poem has real potential, but there are a couple of things that let the poem down a little. Firstly, the rhyming is a ...

Hello! I think what you have here is the beginnings of a good poem. It just needs... more. Maybe more description and more feeling. Perhaps something that makes it personal ...

Hi there! I really like this poem - you have a very pleasing tone, and it is wonderful to read. Just one or two things though: you begin by describing ...

How exciting! I love it. :D

Hello! Parts of this sound very pleasing. Specifically, the beginning and the end. The middle, not so much. The first two lines, I can relate to, and I like the ...

Hello! There are two main problems I see with this, as it is now. The first is that it doesn't really look like a poem. The only thing indicating that ...

:lol: Sorry, F.R.E.D.! F.R.E.D. is too scared to start a conversation with anyone - we always have to start the conversation with him, which makes him a great big nebbish.

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1. Demeter. 2. Jack. 3. Cheez_burger. Yummy. 4. Snoink. 5. Jabber. ^_^ Book: How To Practice by HH Dalai Lama CD: A Beautiful Lie by 30 Seconds to Mars Food: ...

Kings and Queens by 30 Seconds to Mars. :)

Hi there! I quite like your poem. The rhyming scheme is good and it flows well. It also sounds wonderfully melancholy at the end. However, the only thing I'm uncertain ...

Hey, Octo! Firstly, I really like your tone. I love how you refer to money and pity, and the contrast of feelings between the crowd and the narrator. The italicised ...

I don't think I would use them, but I really like the pictures, and especially the Winnie the Pooh quotes. I think they might be nice to send to other ...

Finish my novel, find an agent, do more yoga, drink more water and less coke. Oh, and get a job. ^-^

The badges look great. :)